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"You don't start a story with a goodbye. 

As one of my close friends told me, you don't start them with hellos either. No, you strart them with a introduction, relating to the reader...

And in a sense, The begining." 

~~~

The First Day.

Stephano trembled as he stood infront of the large building he knew as School. He feared this place, scared of the unknown and scared of the people inside. They all seemed to look like his parents. 

And Oh, how he feared his parents.


~~~~

"Might I add in?"

"Of course, Zales."

~~~

Gonzales' footseps padded behind Stephano. He knew he wasn't supposed to come to school with him, forbidden by his parents, but he wanted to make sure he wasnt hurt. 

"B-Brother, I-I don't wanna go..." The smaller brother mumbled, "I-It's scary.."

Gonzales smiled softly, setting a hand lightly on his shoulder. "it's okay, I'll be there with you." He bit his lip, knowing the punishment would be severe for doing so.  His brother turned to him, small hope gleaming in his eyes, "R-really?"

~~~

"Take it from here, Rox."


~~~

Gonzales nodded, "Of course." He smiled, walking Stephano through the front doors. 

The golden male still shuddered, afraid of what the day still had in store for him.


~~~ 

"Good first part."

"Thanks. I liked what you wrote anyways."

"Haha, Bye guys."  
New way of telling a story...I guess. :/ I've been sorta stressed as of late. Sorry bout that Bros.

I like it, Rox. And calm down...No need to throw all this stress on yourself.

Eh. :/

~Roxas and Gonzales Out~
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Ask-Gonzales Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
I-I really wanted to say good first part ;_; :iconsulkplz: The story gonzales is faster...
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SilverRoxas Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
Ah, It happens.
And he's faster? :eyes:
Okay
Erm
Hope you enjoyed ^^
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Ask-Gonzales Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
I did and not this kind of faster... stop thinking dirty all the time...
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SilverRoxas Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
I can't
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Ask-Gonzales Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
I know..
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